Monday, 11 August 2008

Deidara one shot (LEMON..x)




Info

Name: Kimiko Yashi

Age: 14

Village: Originally from Iwagakure

Parents: Dead

Personality: Naturally aggressive, cold, protective over those close to you

Deidara’s age: 19

Story

The Akatsuki hideout is an incredibly boring place when everyone else is out on missions… well everyone you can put up with; of course the one team you can’t stand was still here. Loveable and yet so damn annoying Tobi and his god-forsaken, pain-in-the-ass Deidara-sempi are still here. Tobi isn’t too bad when you’re in a good mood, but it’s hard to find you in a good mood and today just isn’t one of those days. Deidara you just can’t stand and to be honest you have no idea why… or so you tell him, the truth is that you know why you hate him. You hate him because whenever he walks past you in the corridor you’re heart beats faster, whenever he sits next to you you’re cheeks feel bright red and flustered, whenever he smiles at you or talks to you you’re stomach seems to have a forest of butterflies within it trying to brake free. You didn’t hate him you hated the fact that he could do this to you.

You wonder the many corridors of the base, as you usually do when boredom takes over, when ‘Oh, Crap’ you thought ‘Tobi!’ he’s sat on the floor with a few knifes and forks and a frying pan, though no food is in sight, you have no idea what he’s doing and don’t wish to, though of course you soon found out “Kimiko will make a delicious birthday pie for Zetsu-san!” he giggled, You froze ‘I know Tobi’s weird… but Psychotic!?’ it rather scared you. You sneakily, crab walk into the nearest room, hopefully he wont notice you. You close the door gently as not to make a sound and emit a huge sigh of relief, he hasn’t seen you. A chuckle brings you back from the brink of relaxation… ‘Of all the rooms in this hell hole I would have to stumble into his room’ you feel the butterflies start to emerge from there chrysalis in your stomach just from knowing he’s in the same room as you and soon they’ll be looking for a way out.

“What a coincidence, un. I was just thinking about you, Kimiko, yeah.” Deidara smiled lightly at you, you look over you’re shoulder at him sat there, rather cutely, crossed legged in his shirt and trousers on his bed, and the second you see his face those butterflies in you stomach are on a rampage, stirring up anger the naturally aggressive you. “Oh yeah, UN? What were you thinking about me for?” you often make fun of the way he talks though really, to you, it just adds to his cuteness, he just rolls his eyes at you, “So were playing this game again then, yeah? Well I’m not in the mood for that right now, so what did you come here for, un?” he says in a joyful and strangely hopeful voice, you turn around, walk over to the end of his bed and gracefully take a seat “Just needed to get way from Tobi” you say shrugging your shoulders “I’m not in the mood today” the light in Deidara’s eyes seems to fade away slightly.

“To get away from Tobi, un? Is that the only reason?” he said hanging his head lightly, you raise an eyebrow at him “Heh, why else would I come here? Gimmi one good reason why I would? I may be bored but I’m not desperate enough to come and visit you” You grin evilly at him though as usually you find your inner Kimiko kicking you, your grin didn’t last long, it fades away as you noticed Deidara smile even if it isn’t a happy one it still counts as a smile “I was hoping, just for once, my wishes would come true, un” he looked up at you once again “You want to know what I was thinking about you earlier, un?” he said, still with that depressing smile plastered on his face, you nod, slightly confused “I was thinking, why do still fanaticise and dream about you and me when you seem to hate me so, un” your eyes widen… ‘This cant be true… he wa… me and him?’… “But I cant help it, whenever I’m alone all I can think about is you, un ” he continues, earning a blush from you, he looks away from you blushing himself “I just thought it was about time I told you, yeah”.

Deidara’s waiting for all hell to brake loose and you’re waiting to wake up and find yourself in you bed clung to your pillow like you do every usual morning… but you aren’t waking up, this is real! You crawl over to him, blushing over 100 shades of red, you kneel in fount of him staring and your knees “Um…D-Deidara… the only reason I act like I do is…” it’s killing you to admit this, you’re an extremely powerful ninja who never shows weakness to anyone though you know you have to get this off your chest “I-I don’t hate you, I just hate this power you have over me… to be truthful, Deidara, I think… I think… I think I lov-” you were cut off by Deidara’s lips crashing into yours.

Your eyes widen larger then what should be humanly possible but after getting over the initial shock you kiss back, wrapping your arms around his neck to deepen the kiss. You feel his tongue gently brush against your bottom lip, begging for entrance, which you gave, shyly. He slides in his tongue and explores every inch of your mouth, mapping it out for further reference and you in return slid your tongue past his defences and examine the inner workings of his mouth. You feel Deidara smile into the kiss as his tongue declares war on yours, as you’re tongues battle it out Deidara starts to gently slide up your Kimono, wanting it off, you brake the kiss long enough for him to quickly slip it off and throw it to the floor and you in return made quick work of his shirt. He pushed you back onto the bed and straddled you his lips meeting yours once again but there was no hesitation this time and you instantly kissed back, he broke from the kiss and started to leave a trail of kisses on your neck, searching for your soft spot, he knew he found it when you let out a soft and barely audible moan. He grins and starts to nip and blow on it causing you to moan deeper, he stops after a while and sits back, taking you in. You wonder what he’s staring at when it clicks what he has in his hands. Your bra. You blush deeply and try to cover your E- cup chest “its too late for that Kimi” he a chuckles with cheeky grin, throwing your bra to the floor to join your kimono “and anyway, you have no reason to hide away such a beautiful body” he caresses your cheek as if to say ‘its ok’ and you remove your arms, blushing as you feel his wanting eyes scanning you over.

He leans in and kisses your neck once again making his way to your chest taking you left nipple in his mouth, encircling it with his tongue and nipping it lightly causing your back to arch and a deep moan escape your lips. He wraps his arms around your waist to ensure a strong grip, allowing his hand-tongues to tickle you lightly... and oddly pleasurably. You had never realized before how much you wanted him! Right now foreplay was torture! He kissed his way over to your other breast and treated it with the same luxurious torment he did before. You were getting hot now and wanted to take control for a while.

You flipped him so now you were atop of him, striping him of any annoying items of clothing that were keeping you from getting what you want. You encircle his now rock-hard member with your tongue, earning a slight moan from Deidara, though this isn’t enough for you. You lick, slowly, up his length and his tip, slipping him into your mouth, dragging your teeth gently up and down him, making him moan deeper, but still, this isn’t enough. You speed up, getting rougher and biting down on him, mixing his pleasure with a sensational pain. A deep moan echoes from his throat as he cums, this was what you were aiming for, you swallow and lick you lips, savouring his taste. This taste makes you want more but Deidara wants his fun first, he flips you taking control again.

He makes his way to your panties, ripping them off with his teeth, leaving him exactly where he wants to be and with out hesitation, slides his tongue into you opening. You gasp only for the gasp to turn into a moan, you could feel Deidara smirk, he knew this was torture for you, he knew you wanted him. “Too bad I’m a tease, un, right Kimi?” he muttered against you inner thigh, sending shudders up you spine, before slipping his tongue inside you once again, exploring every inch of your most intermit area. He wraps his arms around you thighs and forces his moist muscle deeper in you, he removes his tongue while you're right on the verge, leaving you hanging, his starts to kiss and nibble you inner thigh, giving you an amazing sensation but not the sensation you wanted. One of his hands starts to draw little circles on your thigh with its tongue you had almost forgotten about those, he slides his other hand to your opening and allows it's tongue to slither within you exploring what his own tongue had examined before. This is too much you clutch the bed cover, tightly, knowing you are able to do noting be feel helpless at the amazing hands of this magnificent man, finally you cum, he removes this hand-tongue and licks it gently from your opening and swallows it, grinning “sweet, un?… how ironic” you knew you weren’t the sweetest person in the world but how odd for him to bring it up now. NOW! Of all times… Deidara crawls his way up on top of you while your not paying attention though his movement brings you back into the real world; this is what you were waiting for! Finally it was time!



You wrap your arms around Deidara’s neck and bite you lip… waiting for the pain. He doesn’t keep you waiting for long and forces his way within you. You dig your nails into Deidara’s shoulders, whining slightly, breaking the skin and drawing blood, he winces a bit but stays in place giving you time to adjust to him being there. You reassure him by removing your nails from his flesh giving him the ‘go ahead’ to continue, he does as you signal, slowly and gently sliding in and out of you, noticing you were still in pain. Before too long the pain subsides and is replaced by a new indescribable, pleasurable pain. It isn’t enough. “Deidara… faster… deeper… harder… ” You manage to moan out, he grins and does as instructed, hitting you spot every time, only harder and faster now. You start bounce up your hips to meet his, forcing him deeper within you making the pleasure more intense, but still this isn’t good enough. You wrap your legs around his waist, forcing him deeper still …and that was it…what you were searching for... pure ecstasy. You can feel that you were coming to your climax, you drag you nails along his back, moaning his name and he returns the favour. He starts to push deeper and slower into you and with one final push you both cum, allowing both your juices mixing within you.

Deidara lies by the side of you, wiping off beads of sweet from you forehead. He chuckles and pulls your heavily panting body into a loving embrace “Heh, at least now I’ve given you a reason to come visit me” he grins, planting a gentle kiss on your forehead.

^-^ hehe, this is my first item posted ever! So I’m sorry if its crap… if it is please tell me so and please give me ways I can improve! Thanx for reading! Hope it wasn’t a waist of my time and yours…


13 comments:

Katherine said...

nice work! i think you did great. keep up the good work ^_^

sydney said...

that was the best deidara lemon ever

itagurl#1 said...

omg it was da best ive eva read keep up the work ^_-

Kara said...

OMG I amblushing and I can't stop giggling!!!!! SO AWESOME!!!!

nejihyugafan said...

Holy crap, I GOT WET!! I loved it! Keep on making mroe!!

Deidara_AkatsukiFan9 said...

Omg, I LOVED IT!!!!!

Racheal said...

tee hee u r good please make make more

e1bda274-37df-11e0-b2a4-000bcdcb8a73 said...

Random comment...Why would a 14 year old have an E-cup chest? .___.

crazygaarafangirl52 said...

lol true... e-cup...

Unknown said...

it didn't waist time. it killed time

Unknown said...

it didn't waist time. it killed time

Unknown said...

it didn't waist time. it killed time

HidanXKatzu said...

is very young....good story though JessiSnoo is a good girl!